tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3310781883951487237.post7116226886507566592..comments2023-03-31T05:50:32.182-07:00Comments on Evie's Whispered Words: The Pronoun ProblemEvelyn Applegatehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06871705818657918387noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3310781883951487237.post-30279570099788721892009-10-25T08:31:53.566-07:002009-10-25T08:31:53.566-07:00I will expand, and Evelyn will probably recognize ...I will expand, and Evelyn will probably recognize my style, but no one else will <b>^_^</b>.<br /><br><br />Julia's hands played in her lover's hair, sifting through the golden strands, letting the silken feel of it sink into her, bending to kiss it and smell its fresh scent. She ran her hands through it at last and down the girl's shoulders, cherishing the smooth skin and closing her eyes, to then open them again when her hands reached the soft curves and their nubbled peaks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3310781883951487237.post-493585278051728522009-10-22T22:47:45.896-07:002009-10-22T22:47:45.896-07:00Anonymous commenter- I will try that, thanks. :)Anonymous commenter- I will try that, thanks. :)Evelyn Applegatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06871705818657918387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3310781883951487237.post-12914409136930055542009-10-22T04:25:53.528-07:002009-10-22T04:25:53.528-07:00Valid pet peeve. I find the repetition of names, e...Valid pet peeve. I find the repetition of names, especially used in dialogue, can get a little creepy after a while!EmilyBryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03542349086762747179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3310781883951487237.post-53215234497084578802009-10-22T02:58:51.860-07:002009-10-22T02:58:51.860-07:00Use one first name, and not the other's. Try i...Use one first name, and not the other's. Try it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com